Starfleet, this is the U.S.S Hyperion. We have broken the warp 1-[static]-Starfleet! STARFLEET! Can you hear us? We've been out here for weeks... Only one thing to do... Look at the majesty below us... It's amazing.
This actually looks very realistic. The dust on the spiral arms and the galactic center look especially nice. The only thing I can think of is that the bloom from the center should spread out a little more and wash out the pink a bit more, but other than that, very nice job.